Financial Crisis: A Poem
The Financial Crisis is everywhere,
It has made us all aware,
We all work as hard as slaves,
Yet the money we earn must all be saved.
Everything seems so expensive,
The air around is apprehensive,
We must learn to take more care,
With money, how can life be fair?
Comments (6)
04 Dec 2018
Nice use of the storytelling skill, well done! Sometimes when we try to make things rhyme, we lose out on what we really mean. Are there any lines here where you would swap a rhyming word to include something that you think is more relevant or meaningful?
yeah i think i probably would
04 Dec 2018
Can we do 2 final pieces . One in a group , and one alone .
Yes- though we'd suggest you make sure that they offer something different.
09 Dec 2018
I really loved your poem - I think it sort of made me realise how BADLY it affected some people, how TERRIBLE the financial crisis was. If course, I would've been very young, and not very aware of what was going on. But after asking my parents, I think it seemed a LOT worse. Great post strong_dolphin!
thank you
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