Financial Crisis: A Poem

strong_dolphinFaringdon Community College | United Kingdom 04 December 2018

The Financial Crisis is everywhere,

It has made us all aware,

We all work as hard as slaves,

Yet the money we earn must all be saved.

Everything seems so expensive,

The air around is apprehensive,

We must learn to take more care,

With money, how can life be fair?

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Olivia @ Topical Talk
04 Dec 2018

Nice use of the storytelling skill, well done! Sometimes when we try to make things rhyme, we lose out on what we really mean. Are there any lines here where you would swap a rhyming word to include something that you think is more relevant or meaningful?
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1. strong_dolphin | Faringdon Community College | United Kingdom
  Olivia @ Topical Talk's comment 15 Jan 2019
  
  yeah i think i probably would
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entertaining_tangerine | St Gregory's Catholic Primary School B| United Kingdom
04 Dec 2018

Can we do 2 final pieces . One in a group , and one alone .
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1. Tiff @ Topical Talk
  entertaining_tangerine's comment 05 Dec 2018
  
  Yes- though we'd suggest you make sure that they offer something different.
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impartial_panda_bear | Boutcher C of E Primary School A | United Kingdom
09 Dec 2018

I really loved your poem - I think it sort of made me realise how BADLY it affected some people, how TERRIBLE the financial crisis was. If course, I would've been very young, and not very aware of what was going on. But after asking my parents, I think it seemed a LOT worse. Great post strong_dolphin!
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1. strong_dolphin | Faringdon Community College | United Kingdom
  impartial_panda_bear's comment 15 Jan 2019
  
  thank you
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