Hong Kong poem

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• persistent_effort | Arnhem Wharf Primary School
  26 Sep 2019

  Here’s another poem
  
  Hear the news (about HK )
  Overcome your fears
  Nothing to do but listen to yells
  Get prepared to leave
  
  Keep calm and carry on
  Out of the blue you are stressed
  Never give up on you and family
  Gas masks at the ready

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• persistent_effort | Arnhem Wharf Primary School
  26 Sep 2019

  P.S sorry about the extra letters (very long sentences)

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• willing_flight | Arnhem Wharf Primary School
  26 Sep 2019

  Hi those were really good poems, you probably took a long time to think about them. As well I would just want to mention how you used lots of interesting words!

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• 1. persistent_effort | Arnhem Wharf Primary School
     willing_flight's comment 27 Sep 2019

     thank you

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  2. persistent_effort | Arnhem Wharf Primary School
     willing_flight's comment 27 Sep 2019

     What type of words would you say ?
     What would you say I need to improve on ?

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• persistent_effort | Arnhem Wharf Primary School
  27 Sep 2019

  Please let me know if I need areas for improvement

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• spirited_insect | Braiswick Primary School
  29 Sep 2019

  Thanks for the poem. It really helped in describing. Improvement: we should help not watch but it was okay.
  :)

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• persistent_effort | Arnhem Wharf Primary School
  30 Sep 2019

  Thank you. but where did you get :we should help not watch ? There is no W in the word Hong Kong

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