Hong Kong poem
Have pity
Occuring right now
Nothing to do but watch
Get ready to leave
Keep low profile
Out of the blue you are scared
Never give up
Gas masks at the ready
Have pity
Occuring right now
Nothing to do but watch
Get ready to leave
Keep low profile
Out of the blue you are scared
Never give up
Gas masks at the ready
Comments (8)
26 Sep 2019
Here’s another poem
Hear the news (about HK )
Overcome your fears
Nothing to do but listen to yells
Get prepared to leave
Keep calm and carry on
Out of the blue you are stressed
Never give up on you and family
Gas masks at the ready
26 Sep 2019
P.S sorry about the extra letters (very long sentences)
26 Sep 2019
Hi those were really good poems, you probably took a long time to think about them. As well I would just want to mention how you used lots of interesting words!
thank you
What type of words would you say ?
What would you say I need to improve on ?
27 Sep 2019
Please let me know if I need areas for improvement
29 Sep 2019
Thanks for the poem. It really helped in describing. Improvement: we should help not watch but it was okay.
:)
30 Sep 2019
Thank you. but where did you get :we should help not watch ? There is no W in the word Hong Kong
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