Letter to Mr Gove
Dear Mr Gove
Currently I am a year 6 student at Hammond junior school in lightwater ,Surrey which is part of your consitiuency in Surrey Heath . I am wrighting to you in regards of the Hong kong in crisis . Recently , there has been a lot of protests due to China intervening in Hong kong elections .
My strong opinion of this matter in hand is that we should intevine ,as Britain and Hong Kong share a history . In 1997 Britain presented Hong Kong back to China and singed a 1 country 2 systems . As a result of this Hong kong was promised freedom until 2047 . Although ,China is contantly breaking this promise , Hong Kong feel like it's a 1 country 1 and a half systems.
Moving swiftly on ,I am going to talk about China and Hong kings point of view . In Hong kong their governors are elected by China which leads to China meddling in Hong kings elections . An astonishing amount of chinese siticens admit they are not proud of their goverment .
In conclusion to this ,my opinion of intervining still stands strong .If we use violence China will send in their army .The biggest in the world . I'm sure we can agree would not be necessary .
yours sincerely
patient_mouse .
Comments (22)
25 Oct 2019
Your text is really good. You used lots of facts which made me realise why you think that. Really really good
25 Oct 2019
I agree with you strongly
This is really persuasive!
25 Oct 2019
Not bad it’s good
25 Oct 2019
Keep on going their rally good
25 Oct 2019
It was amazing
25 Oct 2019
This is a very good piece of writing! Well Done! I agree with you.
25 Oct 2019
I do not agree with you
25 Oct 2019
Very Good
25 Oct 2019
Really good
25 Oct 2019
Thanks for the insperational comments
25 Oct 2019
Wonderful letter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Absolutely lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
25 Oct 2019
This is really good
thank you
25 Oct 2019
A-maz-ing
13 Dec 2019
I want to thank everyone who commented on my post
17 Jan 2020
I agree
20 Jan 2020
I like your post I agree that we should intervene
I like your post
24 Jan 2020
To patient mouse
All of you're facts defend you on your point though I don't agree it is a amazing piece and you should be very proud of your self
yours sincerely
wonderful_skill
Thanks for your support
13 Feb 2020
I love this post it has totally changed my opinion and now I think we should intervene!!!!!!
From wonderful_skill
06 Mar 2020
Thanks so much
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