A poem about space

willing_saxophonePhoenix Primary School 07 November 2019

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Hi, This is my post about space poems i made

The orbs, the milky-ways, the circling worlds;

Now bright, sublime,

In clusters shine

The stars divine.

And 'cross the twinkling void the meteor whirls.

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Olivia @ Topical Talk
07 Nov 2019

We'd like to see more developed posts on the Hub from now on, showing excellent reasoning skills, rather than poetry. Thanks!
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dynamic_weaver | Beverley St Nicholas Primary School A | United Kingdom
07 Nov 2019

well done
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adept_leaf | St Mary's Catholic Primary School B
07 Nov 2019

Really good
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willing_saxophone | Phoenix Primary School
08 Nov 2019

thanks you
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illuminated_writer | Phoenix Primary School
08 Nov 2019

Good job I can see you have chosen the words that join your whole poem together and you put a lot of effort into your poem even though it is a short poem.well done.
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diplomatic_nature | Hillyfield Primary Academy
08 Nov 2019

great poem but more about space
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incredible_snow | St Mary's Catholic Primary School B
11 Nov 2019

lovely poem.
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lovely_passionfruit | St Mary's Catholic Primary School B
14 Nov 2019

great work and good poem
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