A poem about space

Hi, This is my post about space poems i made
The orbs, the milky-ways, the circling worlds;
Now bright, sublime,
In clusters shine
The stars divine.
And 'cross the twinkling void the meteor whirls.
Hi, This is my post about space poems i made
The orbs, the milky-ways, the circling worlds;
Now bright, sublime,
In clusters shine
The stars divine.
And 'cross the twinkling void the meteor whirls.
Comments (8)
07 Nov 2019
We'd like to see more developed posts on the Hub from now on, showing excellent reasoning skills, rather than poetry. Thanks!
07 Nov 2019
well done
07 Nov 2019
Really good
08 Nov 2019
thanks you
08 Nov 2019
Good job I can see you have chosen the words that join your whole poem together and you put a lot of effort into your poem even though it is a short poem.well done.
08 Nov 2019
great poem but more about space
11 Nov 2019
lovely poem.
14 Nov 2019
great work and good poem
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