a poem on things that space holds

incredible_snowSt Mary's Catholic Primary School B 14 November 2019

Space,

a dark,mysterious void where the impossible happens

a place of wonder, anticipation and loss

a home to all the stray stars and planets that it holds

Space

it holds the future of mankind

science evolved around it

the history of inspirational people

it brings a life to the dead

it gives us hope, success and inspiration

space

it holds secrets waiting to be found

it keeps astronemers hypnotised for days

it gives wings to flightless

and beauty to the ugly.

this poem means that however much we try we will never find all of the secrets of space. the bit about loss is that many people have been sent up there and not returned. Space is incredible and with our technology, we should be able to discover new things.

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Olivia @ Topical Talk
14 Nov 2019

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lovely_passionfruit | St Mary's Catholic Primary School B
14 Nov 2019

well done incredible_snow this is an amazing piece and I really enjoyed reading it. great work!
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reasoning_honeydew | Allerton High School
14 Nov 2019

I thought this was a beautiful poem incredible_snow, and the way you wrote how it is the source of so many things really caught my interest. Keep writing! :)
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triumphant_performance | Hillyfield Primary Academy
16 Nov 2019

I liked that it said space and said something new about it each time
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