The diary of Neil Armstrong
Dear Diary,
Oh lord! Today is the day, today I set off for Space! I can't believe it, am I really gonna be the first person going to space? Well, I better get going,I I can't be late!
4 Hours later...
Wow, that's was a bit of a drive wasn't it? Even longer than to an airport or the countryside. Blah, I hope the spaces it isn't hot, It's already boiling... As I enter the space station, I am greeted with a refreshing breeze hit me as a Air conditioning is directly above me.I see a reception with the NASA Logo. " Hello, Neil Armstrong" I proudly told the reception " Ah yes, First man going to Space aye? Don't be worried. We Assure you. This will be the best experience of your life!!!" Although I was worried, that speech made me feel a bit better.She guided me to where I would meet my 'driver' and my space suit. I was begging for it not to be tight and uncomfortable.I am gonna start in it for at least a week!
1 hour later...
I'm finally boarding the rocket. That took ridiculously long! This rocket is surprisingly High-tech. Honestly,II have never seen anything advanced like it. Out of nowhere, a beaming voice shook me " 10...9...8....7....6....5.....4....3....2...1! ...... BLAST OFF!!" The rocket shook rapidly as we began going higher....and higher! Now we play the waiting game - level EXTREME! -WWe war for 8 whole boring days eating boring food. I might as well sleep for the whole time and only wake up for food!
TO BE CONTINUED
(Please note , None of this is true and none of actually happened )
Comments (13)
10 Dec 2019
He was the first man on the moon not in space a Russian man named Yuri Gagarin
How do you know that this is true...........?
10 Dec 2019
How do you know all of this?is this true?👐🏼👍🏻🤓😅
This is not true,not one bit is true in fact,none f this is factual,this is all a diary
11 Dec 2019
great post!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, just needs a few factual tweaks.
12 Dec 2019
I liked how you used the perspecive of Neil Armstrong but maybe you could do a bit more
12 Dec 2019
Because I would like to know how Neil felt when he was on the moon
13 Dec 2019
I do not think Neil is the first man on the moon I believe it was buzz aldrin if the moon landing even happened il comment that on a different post
No Neil Armstrong was the fist on the moon buzz aldrin was second and Michael Collins stayed on the spacecraft to control the craft
13 Dec 2019
I really like this :)
13 Dec 2019
Great post but it just needs a little tweak and I think the first man to step on the moon was Buzz Aldrin
25 Mar 2020
i think you post is interesting but it could use with more emotions just a few tweaks :)
15 Oct 2021
How do you know that this is true...........?
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