STAY SAFE AROUND KNIFES AND STRANGERS!!!!!!!!

We should reduce knife crime

Because if you do it

You are just ending peoples life for no reason.

The only reason people are dying quicker

Is because younger people are starting to follow

Bad things because of gangs.

Gangs, anger

It's not necessary

Gangters, stabbing

Gangsters are bad

But you should listen because its crime.

Knife crime is bad and you can’t fight it.

So don’t try just hide

Or tell a trusted adult

That you can count on.

STAY SAFE !!!

quick_solution | Ravenscroft Primary School
22 May 2019

Wonderful piece I can see you have tried your hardest
I like the structure it is just like the poem type that we are learning at school :)
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1. noble_flower | Ravenscroft Primary School
  quick_solution's comment 13 Jun 2019
  
  thank you so much
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