Violence, Shame On! extraordinary_thoughtMichael Faraday School | United Kingdom 13 February 2019 Comments (2) Olivia @ Topical Talk 13 Feb 2019 A brilliantly presented poem and a really good use of rhyme. Sometimes rhyming words detract from the message as they can feel a bit messy and forced, but I think this has been so well thought through and planned that it is really powerful. I also like how you return to your earlier line at the end. Great work! Reply to this comment cheerful_leaves | Michael Faraday School | United Kingdom 14 Feb 2019 Really good poem I loved it!!! Reply to this comment You must be logged in with Student Hub access to post a comment. Sign up now!