Violent Crime Slam Poem
What's the point of holding a knife ?
It's obvious you're risking a life .
Then when you're on the news ,
You're going to feel abused .
God's watching every second of you .
Trust me , it's no use .
If you're in a gang ,
You're starting to hang .
Listen to the good omens ,
They'll give you a bit of luck .
A message to end the poem :
Do not drop ,
Otherwise happiness will stop .
By generous_banana :D
Comments (2)
12 Feb 2019
When reading the poem,add the word “ because “ at the start of line number 7 and change the word “then” on line number 3 to “because” as well so it makes MORE sense :D
13 Feb 2019
I forgot to check for mistakes , but it's all right now I told you :)
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